tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1857570192805451446.post3896617321596831621..comments2022-06-24T20:57:47.294-07:00Comments on Lost in The BoZone - Too: CompatibleMRMacrumhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01414173517957120477noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1857570192805451446.post-51171152959155097962011-12-23T06:25:06.324-08:002011-12-23T06:25:06.324-08:00Yup, you played the line well with the tension and...Yup, you played the line well with the tension and had us hooked!<br />Great character study. Kept expecting someone to take a swim.<br />I do the same thing- I write over the limit and then cut what needs cutting.<br />Writing is knowing what to leave out.Thomas Pluckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17008022962076648740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1857570192805451446.post-52866566532561854282011-12-21T20:46:40.960-08:002011-12-21T20:46:40.960-08:00This made me smile. I like these guys. I too thoug...This made me smile. I like these guys. I too thought there would be some shenanigans with the bloody apron--it added some suspense and tension. I'm glad it didn't go there. Well done. Thanks for sharing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07721288431605045643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1857570192805451446.post-74778630550250975902011-12-21T17:34:26.105-08:002011-12-21T17:34:26.105-08:00This is kind of like a moment in time... A moment ...This is kind of like a moment in time... A moment between two characters. Enjoyed this! But particularly this: "I know, you wanted your own retreat, your quiet place to escape Humanity. Well goddammit, then retreat and shut the fuck up."<br /><br />I could think of a few people I'd like to say that to...! :-)Ingrid KV Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01357668181484669053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1857570192805451446.post-17014968053701629382011-12-21T16:35:06.098-08:002011-12-21T16:35:06.098-08:00I enjoyed this character study. I admit I thought ...I enjoyed this character study. I admit I thought Caleb was doomed when Harold's bloody apron popped out. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com